Tuesday, 23 July 2013

Wonderful peer feedback at writing time!


Today after we had finished our morning writing we read our stories to a friend. They were looking for full stops, capital letters, five sentences and really exciting words. We helped each other make our writing even better! 










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  1. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 14:31

    I heard people talking about great words to use in their writing.
    I heard shatter, peeked, destroyed and shook.
    They were great describing words!

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  2. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 14:35

    Hi Will what are you writeing about?

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  3. Anonymous3 August 2013 at 19:51

    Hello everybody
    who said Hi Will what are you writing about.
    From Jade

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